Chris,You had me totally hooked on your opening. I even smiled when the new part came up- the bridge. But then it stopped. Why? There was SO much more room for development here. Even if you had returned to the original statement ofter the bridge chords, it would have improved the form of the piece.Excellent synth sounds, and a thoughtful groove (even though the bass was a wee bit muddy). Your post was a list of things you did, but you didn't explain why you did those things. That would have been helpful.Overall good work. More development would be better.
I thought the way you blended your sounds together was very cool in the beginning, however your sound got very muddy toward the middle and end and i think it took away from your overall sound.
Chris,
ReplyDeleteYou had me totally hooked on your opening. I even smiled when the new part came up- the bridge. But then it stopped. Why? There was SO much more room for development here. Even if you had returned to the original statement ofter the bridge chords, it would have improved the form of the piece.
Excellent synth sounds, and a thoughtful groove (even though the bass was a wee bit muddy).
Your post was a list of things you did, but you didn't explain why you did those things. That would have been helpful.
Overall good work. More development would be better.
I thought the way you blended your sounds together was very cool in the beginning, however your sound got very muddy toward the middle and end and i think it took away from your overall sound.
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